In school I learned how to write a news story. I wrote about a car robbery of my friend's moms car and it's a pretty good story and I would like some feedback about what I could improve on, please enjoy. Mystery Man September 11 the mystery man robbed the weeks family they broke into mrs weeks car AND TOOK EVERYTHING. The next day mrs weeks called the cops they did come to investigate WHICH IS THERE JOB Some people say there job is to only to stop crime which isn't true. So will you ever no who robbed mrs weeks car we have not found out was mrs weeks lost but in the night maximus weeks saw they open the car door but he didn't think it was real and he was seeing things but he wasn't the next day they found out that there was nothing in the car so mrs weeks called the cops and they didn't find any fingerprints which is sad but that doesnt stop the police i think. Well at least there was not that much stuff that was important that got stolen and maxim...
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